Elizabeth

Oh wow, i really liked this one. It sounds like it would be spoken outloud like this program at this highschool called SPOKEN WORD. Where poets read their poems and ...

I'ts like 2 in the morning and I read as much as life would allow me to. I believe DOHnuT is spelled... DOUGHNUT I liked it so far... I'm not ...

You have GOT TO stop using AN for AND. It's AND! Don't type how you SPEAK unless you're first or third person! People who heard him announced he was a ...

I honestly.... I liked the way you wrote this, but there was this odd feeling to it that make me twinge beneath it... Aso I got confused and I think ...

It made sense in a deep spiritually tiring way.... Other than that it was obliviously confusing. And yes i know obliviously doesn't belong there but live with it, I like ...

Chillingly good work, I wonder why nobody else has read it, you should think about updating this (Just sayin' and browsing through peoples portfolios...) Nice job though, full of information ...

NO, when you click EDIT POST to that you can change the title... Dargh, as for the story, it was OK. I just finished reading chapter three of the jungle ...

I honestly think you should ahve put these in seperate posts. I mean I wrote a poem called BEAUTIFUL with a friend of mine. I put them together because they ...

Hahaha... If this happened then I feel so sorry for your mother... But JESUS if it doesn't open *falls over laughing* For once in your life you haven't PM'd me ...

This was cute... Honestly not something that I haven't read already, but it was just this short innocent poem. I can relate to it... Very good, I voted you should ...

Greg, THIS was VERY AWKWARD! To me, I couldn't find a nice and smooth way to make the poem flow.... The words seemed so sharp and jagged and one syllabulled... ...

Wow, this was really good... Maybe I'll write something similar to this... but wow You totally deserved to win that competition Bee. WAY TO GO! Sorry if it didn't come ...

I really liked this... I liked the way you wrote it because it would set more images to mind. Such as: I traced my fingers around your body rather than: ...

For one to know is not always for one to find out. The never ending secret The never ending lies He is to scared to cover it up. Sweaty palms ...

This did move a bit fast. Honestly, the death of her grandpa... I thought it was going to be a little humerous with the word oddball in the title.. And ...