Elizabeth

That moment was so perfect that day, Using THAT two times was kind of... weird. Other than that I can't find anything more weird, although love within itself is weird ...

Whoa, whoa, this was like... I liked it. Your style of writing in itself is what kept me reading it. I liked it though... It is pretty odd... well, it ...

“He’s so beautiful when he smiles…” Three continues. “Just look at him… please…” Yes, I can totally relate to this. It was beautifully written and I love it.... this has ...

Wow, I remember skimming through this about one year ago and not knowing how to post. I can easily say this is very beautiful, it's unfair that you have talent ...

Yes it seemed more like a conclusion.... I think I missed it, but why were they friendly and not loving towards each another? Did he die or be sent off ...

I think that I am currently blinded.... I honestly think that , as of right now, when we walk out of the room, I will punch you! It reminds me ...

Whoa... this was like deep... I mean deep. It was beautifully written and not too wordy... wow. My favorite part was: I hit up another pair of sticks, flicking and ...

This was a very beautiful poem, your moms voice or not. You should be proud your mom has a voice like this, you might have gotten some of her voice ...

heh, surprisngly I am surprised this wasn't written in hate... it reminded me of somebody I used to hate, now we're friends... although she is annoying. This was really great ...

It was good but the rhyming scheme changed at: It’s sentimental It’s nostalgia It’s completely mental That I’m sane enough Where it went 1212 instead of 1122... or whatever logic ...

I liked it, puncuation or not :P It gave me this... pretty... lovely image in my head... although somewhat insanely creepy (But that's the mood I'm in, don't take it ...

Hmm, been a while since you posted as far as I can remember, I really liked this. Of course I have always liked your poems... no acception... My favourite line ...

This was really good... This was really sweet... I was picturing it as if it were a little movie scene... I liked this! Wow, good for you. Beautiful *wipes tears ...

This was good metaphors and discriptiveness.... The three monesters? *wonders about who it could be* I liked this one a lot better than the other one, maybe because it was ...

Wow, I really liked this. It sounds like last years play. Everything was always changing and the teacher wouldeither shout good or bad at us. I don't really have any ...