Elizabeth

Alright, I order you to stop writing better than anybody I know. "Beauty captured canvas (casket) – Life firmly trimmed But the otherworld is drifting Deep within absence of light" ...

LOL I was browsing again... read this, laughed again. And I hate you Colton :) Hahahaha :P AND I SHAVEEEEEE NO MORE LEGS WITH A LASER!!!

I don't know how... much I can do in one post... but ONTO THE FIRST PARAGRAPH!: It was and (Should be an ) unbearably hot day in the land of ...

and the corpse gurgles and goes limp. If it's a corpse... how can it gurgle? Chilling though, grand, I don't care if I'm not 16 or another, nobody in this ...

9 years old? whoa... people nowadays have such odd influences... I remember once I tried to kill a frog... I got it's mouth open and there was a ladybug in ...

Of passion and rage Laying on a spine Of a rose A platform of thorns A slumber of beauty My favourite lines.... *cries* And for your information, it's kind of ...

First off: Shouldn't Are planet be Are planet s ? Aghh, can't finish criticing, got to go, but I have to say I liked this... pretty... although I thought it ...

.... And you're 17 years old? Whoa... I never thought of chocolate with such big words. Chocolate is simple Chocolate is kind It's the real type o' chocolate That I ...

Hmm... This was really... whoa, I can't say, but yeah, it totally had heart to it, and I was there when you said you'd write it :P I wish I ...

Aww this was beautiful :) Although I would be a bit wary if somebody I liked randomly kissed me out of nowhere... wouldn't the class go EEEW? :P Anywya, this ...

Heh, I really liked it, I never knew anybody who can write lyrics like this... Ahh, now I want to hear it! [[Pouts]] "the outskirts of your world now ripple ...

Heh, this was pretty. You express Valentines day the way I express Christmas: in a negative way. Oh, how lovely will this be? At least, even though you'll have an ...

Lmao... three year olds.... What an odd poem though... never thought that... this was... going to end like that. Good job though, why don't you draw a picture for it ...

"Bashed me against the bookshelf " I don't know why but... bookshelf made it seem out of rhythm. Just shelf would be good I suppose. I don't know if this ...

Um... I really think... that.... *blank* You should have posted this as a summary elsewhere first off.... Secondly.... *Mind draws a long obnoxious blank and I forget how to solve ...