Published February 4, 2006
This poem was written by my 9 year old cousin Summer 
I once had a frog and I pulled off it's legs.
I clipped them off with a couple of pegs.
It's eyes popped out and then I laughed.
My younger brother came in and barfed.
The frogs eyes rolled out of it's head,
and then fell onto my brothers bed.
I quickly covered them with the sheet,
to give my brother a bedtime treat!
P.S. My aunty did say she was a bit of a monster!!
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OK, hold the phone i Just realised that you are talking about my nine-year-old cousin Summer! Sis, i didnt even know it was you. She is a little monster, take my word for it, she pratically kicked me out of bed and she can beat up her eleven year old brother (sorry matty but its the truth!)
And to think, I was happy playing with poo on a stick and laughing at dead cats when I was nine! Anyway, about the poem it is so cute! and the fact that a little girl wrote it makes it even cuter (I'm not trying to be sexist but you have to admit, if it was a little boy that had writen it most people would think was horrid!) reminds me of my cousin, scarily enough named Summer who's nine (I kid you not!) as she plays WWF on the PS2, she was sitting there screaming "I made him bleed, I made him bleed! Look Mum I'll make him bleed some more!"
very cute, but i fear that "barfed" doesn't fit into the rhyming pattern, my dear. =]
9 years old? whoa... people nowadays have such odd influences... I remember once I tried to kill a frog... I got it's mouth open and there was a ladybug in it! and then I bloody poked it with a stick.
Great poem, haha! Lookin' foreward to this sadistic 9 year old's poem
Splendid! quite amuseing indeed. but it does not completly ryme as you probibly already know.
Hahaha, that's really cute! I don't suppose it really needs any critiquing, because it's not done by a member of this site. But, laughed and barfed don't rhyme.