EliteHusky

I thought that this piece was good. Here's why, I really liked this effect: If her grandmother cared at all—if she didn’t want Zoe to catch pneumonia and die—she would ...

Dear Fangala the Flying Feline, I was honestly very surprised by that poem. I am not a poetry expert but I really like poems that include weather, especially rain. The ...

I can't wait to find out what happened to Maria. I point to the lapel of her blouse Possibly, I said pointing to the lapel of her blouse. *Said could ...

Wow. You've certainly made this piece quite clear although I did find myself stumbling early on in the first paragraph with the structure it was in, present tense. It seems ...

Madison looked away for a moment then back at David Cain. Maybe: Madison looked away for moment then turned her head to face him. It just seems that story was ...

Complex... yet really good. This is so hard for me to review because I absolutely love the poem (if it's not a poem I'm terribly sorry, I've made that mistake, ...

That seems going around in crops of circles I like that! Hmmm.... I'm not sure if that was necessary but it did somewhat help to the atmosphere which complements the ...

He wore a black tunica and simple woven leggings Did you mean Tunic? Otherwise it was pretty good considering the size. The descriptions used gave me a sense of the ...

I think the Duchess sounds very evil but I found myself a little lost throughout this piece, I hope you find these suggestions useful! Although I have not read any ...

I am not a Hindu, but I found your story very entertaining. I'm am being completely honest when I say that I almost laughed out loud while reading the second ...

Seeing as you already have grammatical and spelling corrections posted, which were never my speciality, here are my honest feelings towards that piece. They are a tad harsh, but cruelly ...

Hello Scarlet Monkey, I've before that I'm not a poetry expert but I am rather fond of lyrics. I liked the following part the most: Enter night-time, a perfect shadow ...

First let me start off by saying that although I have not read any of your previous writing, this caught my attention probably due to the good dialogue. I would ...

Ahoy! First let me say that when I started reading this, I just loved the wording you used. Secondly I as I continued to read on I found out it ...

I am not a Poetry Expert but I really liked the fact that it rhymed yet made sense. I found also found it cheerful instead of the usual poetry people ...