EliteHusky

I usually shy away from tragic stories but as I continued to read it completely I thought that id carried some insight. He was going to bury himself alive with ...

This piece you've written called "Safe" was really moving. The focus on abusive men with alcohol and their interactions with their family was captured quite well mindfully capturing each moment ...

The "Pilgrim's Prayer" is very mysterious especially with the overall format. I could not fully understand it the first read but being poetry it was quite intriguing throughout. “Oh then, ...

Ideas happen all of the time. Most of what I personally wrote was taken from memories and specific scenes from dreams as well. I thought this idea you had of ...

First of all, wow. You really placed a lot of effort into this and it shows throughout the piece. You said that you were rambling on, not quite sure of ...

Good work on this poem. Despite the formatting, which varies from person to person and reflects their personal taste as well as the overall atmosphere associated with the work, I ...

First of all this was very well written. You introduced the reader to character named Gwen and then flipped the world around to a situation when she was no longer ...

This was a fast paced story with mystery and action in most directions. I think it would make a rather good oral repetition. Mainly because of the theme and the ...

Racism is a difficult topic, as mentioned in your father's poem. I imagine it would depend on interpretation the bond between between you and the person whom you have said ...

Overall this was interesting, especially since the atmosphere I perceived was that of a rainy day, which is always a nice setting for adventure. I liked the main idea of ...

I'll start off by saying that I was amused to see the term "Subway" used to to refer to a long sandwich as a while ago my mum was telling ...

Gabriel yanked Glennings out of the car just as the bullets escaped the barrel, embedding themselves into the backseat of the cab. Gabriel dragged Glennings into the alley In my ...

I really enjoyed that part even though I had not read the first part. Despite the story's somewhat gloomy atmosphere concerning death, I found humour. That is a good thing ...

I happen to know a bit about of history about the Templars and based on your poem, so do you. I really liked how you took a part of controversial ...

Wow, that was a good poem, although at some parts I found myself halting a bit to get synchronized in it's rhythm. An old forgotten memory A musty faded dream ...