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Re: The Wednesday Girl: Nicholas Baxter
Hey there, and Happy Review day! Elinor here for a review. I really have to say this: I love your character Baxter. He's so hilariously eccentric and absent minded, and ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Story of Summer (Ch. 2): A Secret
Hey, Elinor here for a (not very good but still, I haven't done this in ages) review! Before I start, I'd like to say I LOVE the illustration/book cover you ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: My ideas for my stories
Hey there, Elinor here for a review. Instead on commenting on the general idea here (which last time I checked caused you to verbally abuse me) like I did before, ...
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: Introduce to Stuart Pritchard
Hey, Elinor here for my first review in ages. So what have we here... Another character profile. Very good. I understand you are trying to have us know the character ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: Terra Duenuo - Chapter 1
hello there, Elinor here for a review. it is not often that I genuinly enjoy a sci fi story, especialy on YWS, but in this case i did like it. ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: The Need To Kill
hey there, Elinor here for a review. i liked this, i really did. But since this is a review, i'll have to elaborate more. the insanity and madness here seemed ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: The children who brought anarchy, destruction, and freedom: Prolog
hi, Elinor here for a review. First off, i found this prologue rather doubtful. The fact that it is set in a school does not make me as a reader ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir
Hey, Elinor here. Well, this certainly was rather strange. Teachers committing suicide? Well done! Gory but God is this original. As usual, I analysed the first sentence, and I'd say ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent: Prologue
Hi, Elinor here. Put simply, 'Wow'. This prologue was amazing: short and intriguing. Violent, too, but what really impressed me was that this wasn't unnecessary violence, ie you didn't describe ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Betrayed
Hi, Elinor here. I loved this poem. I could just feel the anger pounding through it. And you've even used the profanities in a correct way, which I think is ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Stephanie Pritchard's Life Chapter 1
Hello, Elinor here for a review. I'll say this upfront: you did not have me hooked. The first line did not leave me in wondering what will happen next. And ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: The Three Little Girls and the Big Bad Society.
You have just succeeded in summing up the evil of society in one short poem. I am totally bowled over. I liked the style, and the way you sort of ...
Apr 27, 2014
