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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Wednesday Girl: Nicholas Baxter

    Hey there, and Happy Review day! Elinor here for a review. I really have to say this: I love your character Baxter. He's so hilariously eccentric and absent minded, and ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Story of Summer (Ch. 2): A Secret

    Hey, Elinor here for a (not very good but still, I haven't done this in ages) review! Before I start, I'd like to say I LOVE the illustration/book cover you ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: My ideas for my stories

    Hey there, Elinor here for a review. Instead on commenting on the general idea here (which last time I checked caused you to verbally abuse me) like I did before, ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Introduce to Stuart Pritchard

    Hey, Elinor here for my first review in ages. So what have we here... Another character profile. Very good. I understand you are trying to have us know the character ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Terra Duenuo - Chapter 1

    hello there, Elinor here for a review. it is not often that I genuinly enjoy a sci fi story, especialy on YWS, but in this case i did like it. ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Literature Re: The Need To Kill

    hey there, Elinor here for a review. i liked this, i really did. But since this is a review, i'll have to elaborate more. the insanity and madness here seemed ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Politics Re: The children who brought anarchy, destruction, and freedom: Prolog

    hi, Elinor here for a review. First off, i found this prologue rather doubtful. The fact that it is set in a school does not make me as a reader ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​​​Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir

    Hey, Elinor here. Well, this certainly was rather strange. Teachers committing suicide? Well done! Gory but God is this original. As usual, I analysed the first sentence, and I'd say ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Endless Descent: Prologue

    Hi, Elinor here. Put simply, 'Wow'. This prologue was amazing: short and intriguing. Violent, too, but what really impressed me was that this wasn't unnecessary violence, ie you didn't describe ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Betrayed

    Hi, Elinor here. I loved this poem. I could just feel the anger pounding through it. And you've even used the profanities in a correct way, which I think is ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Stephanie Pritchard's Life Chapter 1

    Hello, Elinor here for a review. I'll say this upfront: you did not have me hooked. The first line did not leave me in wondering what will happen next. And ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Three Little Girls and the Big Bad Society.

    You have just succeeded in summing up the evil of society in one short poem. I am totally bowled over. I liked the style, and the way you sort of ...

    Apr 27, 2014


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