Elinor

I have not! I'll get to it as soon as I can :)

Just PMed you!

Hi Cello! I actually did make this into a film. :)

Thanks for you review! :) Yeah, names are capitalized as well as important sounds and props. Huh, for some reason those lines got cut off when I pasted it here. ...

I definitely understand what you're getting at, but it doesn't really come across in the piece. And yeah, I referred to sexual entitlement but the same goes for love too. ...

No dear, it's good for me to have constructive feedback. The story I'm trying to tell is that of a girl who has been silenced by the tragic events of ...

Yesss -- the script format isn't supposed to be like that. I tried to get it right but it wouldn't cooperate with me, and this is the best it could ...

Hi! ^^ Thanks for your review.

Hey Pen! Thanks for your reviews on all of my parts. ^^ I thought I'd clarify a few things I noticed that you (and a lot of other people) mentioned ...

Film script*

Hey, thanks for your review! This is indeed a film script? Which means the formatting is going to be a little different

Hi, Thank you for your review. I just wanted to point out that this isn't a script for a stage play, but a short film. And whereas dialogue is important ...

Thanks much! I'll be sure to let you know when the second part's posted.

Well, I made up this myth about how trees came to be, so... ;)

I made up this myth! Haha, Arbor is another term for tree, so I just used it for her name