Elinor

Thanks! Just so you know, the second piece is a short screenplay, so the format is different. But I'd love to know what you think regardless!

Ohhhhhhh I understand now. I would definitely clarify that so dumbos like me don't get confused. :)

Hi Lauren! Thank you so much for you review. I think was going for was that she loved him, regardless of whether or not he was worthy of her love. ...

Thanks so much for your feedback! I tried to be as historical as possible. The reason I didn%u2019t write out the press conference because while I know that footage exists, ...

Lumi%u2019s Beatles contest? You have a chance to redeem yourself sir %u2014 by posting it in the contest thread. ;-)

Ah, that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying!

Boy Wonder = Robin. This poem is from the perspective of Batgirl, and she and Robin have always traditionally been romantically involved!

you are correct, Mason!

Considering I based this off a real person's life, I'm not sure how to go about it. I think I'm going to experiment with a revision that makes this more ...

The general consensus was that that she didn't deserve the Oscar that the year she won, and that she stole it from Judy Garland for A Star is Born (supposedly ...

This was inspired by her. Do you think the piece is stronger if I keep it more general or make it more specific? I think I'm trying to straddle two ...

Hi Stella! This was indeed inspired by Grace Kelly. I guess, if that was clearer, it would make a little more sense as to why she would have to give ...

Oh, hello! Yes - the drunk driving definitely is going to factor in later. Izzy is supposed to be a not great person, who definitely partied a lot in high ...

Hey, I just had a chance to read the part that you added to the beginning. I like it a lot, and it makes things a lot clearer without being ...

Hi Mavery! I so apologize for the delay in getting back to you about this. I just finished the first week of my spring semester at college, so it's been ...