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Hi Aristotle! I'm surprised; this was pretty good. This was your very first poem? You have quite a bit of talent, m'dear. Anyway, nitpicks! As the sun sets to reveal ...

Hi there Walk! Are you new to YWS? If so, I welcome you and thanks for letting me drop by and review this poem. It was okay. I wanted to ...

Hey Edith! I hate to be the annoying reviewer who drops in and actually gives you a serious review, but hey, it should help you in the long run, right? ...

Hi 200397. I have to say that I agree with Galerius on this one. You repeated the word 'blue' way, way, too much. I understand that this about how blue ...

Jasmine! Hello! This was really very good-and it was depressing too. I couldn't really find anything wrong with it, but I do have a few minor nitpicks. I've seen too ...

Hey! Since Light_Devil already critiqued your grammar, I thought I would talk about the characters and plot, okay? The characters seemed kind of blah and not very distingushable. They just ...

Hi Olaf. This was alright. It's got a lot of potential, and I want to like this so much, but your writing style kind of killed it for me. Your ...

Hi Conrad. I don't have much to say, because this was really, really good. This poem is one of those cases where I think description would ruin the piece. Without ...

Hi inkwell! Are you new to YWS? If so, welcome! This was very good! I agree with Matt Bellamy. You have a fantastic word choice, and a nice rhythmic flow ...

Hi Tiffany! How are you? My fingers trembled, my eyes darting nervously around the crowded streets, searching for the perfect target. This is kind of a run-on sentence, no? The ...

Hi Chocochip! Welcome to YWS! This is an interesting piece. When I say interesting, I mean you cover interesting topics that have real potential. You execution, however, wasn't the best. ...

Hi there Grin. No exclamation or smiley faces like in my usual reviews. I'm not in the mood for it all. This was your dream? I too have had very ...

Hi Fiction! Welcome to YWS! It was really good. Have you ever written poetry before? Even if you have its pretty impressive. It was short and sweet, which is exactly ...

Hi Radid! I don't have the time for an in-depth critique right now, but let me say that I really liked this. Your title was catchy, your poem was nice ...

Hi Jame! This was a very sweet poem. It was cute and to the point, and It also reminded me of the movie 'Fly Away Home'. I almost cried, and ...