Elinor

Hiya, So, I like what you're trying to get at with this, and I like what I think that this could become. However, right now it just falls a little ...

Hiya, So, I wanted to like this poem. I really did. However, it somehow just fell flat. I'm not going to lie; you did have lovely imagery and description that ...

Hiya! So, I think the main problem that you have with this story is that it's too short. You barely skim over the ideas that you create, and thus leaving ...

Hehe, this review was written by me a while ago when I barely knew anything about critiquing poetry. Well, you actually can choose, but it's better to know as much ...

Hi! So, I want to wish you the best of luck in the contest! It should be an exciting, fun challenge. Since this is the first page of your story, ...

Hiya! I liked this piece. It was definitely adorable, and I can tell how you factored the assignment you were given into writing this, especially when relating milk to your ...

Hiya! So, my thoughts on this story are a bit mixed. Your writing is good and very solid, but what it seems like to me is that you were pushing ...

Hi! So, I really liked this piece. It was a breath of fresh air after some of the absolutely atrocious works that I've critiqued recently. When did you write this, ...

Hiya. Jorge, having followed the stories that you have posted since you first joined, I'm astonished by the little thought and consideration that you've put into your works. In all ...

Hi! So, like Kaedee, I'm a little confused. This doesn't really resemble a direct narrative in any way, and I don't know why you wrote it to include in the ...

Hiya! So, I don't know what it is, but the formatting is off on this. Did you, by any chance, click 'poem' instead of 'story' for the formatting options below ...

Hiya! So, I'm going to say that I agree with Hope for the most part, but I just wanted to expand upon the points that she made, okay? Show and ...

Hi Ziggy! How are you? It kind of sucks that that happened, but hey, it can to of all us at one point or another, no matter how good we ...

Hi! Hmm, I'm not exactly sure what you're looking for in the critique, so I'm just going to give my general thoughts on where I think the plot could go ...

Hi Jungle! So, I read this once, twice, three times, and with each read-through, I kept thinking, 'Wait a minute, what? Slow down!' You barely introduce Jessica's character, tell (not ...