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Magnus! :D It's been too long. You should definitely spend more time on the site, okay? Thanks so much for requesting this -- I had great fun reading it. You ...

Hi, Dots! So, this was a fun read. Is this for school or some sort of contest? Whichever it is, all of the requirements seem to make the writing of ...

Hi, Lumi! So, you've gotten a lot of feedback on this so far so I'm going to be brief -- I just thought I would stop by and give my ...

Hi there! So I thought that this was a neat little story, and it gave us a fresh perspective on the classic prey-and-predator chase scenes. From the beginning of the ...

Hello! So, this an interesting piece. You have a nice writing style. It definitely seems like you exerted a lot of time and energy in to writing this story. However, ...

Hey, Jas. :) You've gotten some good advice so far so I'm going to be brief. I like your concept here. It's interesting and creative, and I like how you ...

Hi Lily, how are you? I very much like the thought and composition of this poem. It feels very carefully plotted out and structured; I can tell that you cared ...

Hi, Cannon! I'm here. So, this story has some nice parts to it, and I love how you wrote this story with a character who is mentally unstable -- that's ...

Pengu! I cannot begin to tell you how beautiful this poem is. I've read a lot of your poetry in the past but haven't ever gotten around to reviewing it, ...

Hi, It wouldn't hurt to clean up the structure of this poem. You have some nice images here, but the lines are too long and there are a lot of ...

Hey, Raz! I don't have much experience reviewing lyrics, and I don't want to be too repetitive of the other reviews, so bear with me. I thought this was really ...

Hey, daydreamer. :) Sorry this took a bit longer, but I got really tired and left to take a nap -- I'm here now though. This was a good ending ...

Hello again daydreamer! Say, I really do enjoy how this story is progressing as a whole. In general, you have a good sense of character and suspense, and you know ...

Dun dun dun! It's me again. So, here the pace of the story starts to pick up and we get into the fire, and now there is tension and conflict ...

Okay! I would say that this is definitely an interesting concept. I've always loved historical fiction stories, and it's nice that you picked something that is, while still deeply tragic ...