Elinor

I think this was interesting. Obviously it's only an excerpt, so we really just have an idea of who these characters are and what kind of a story s being ...

You lost me when you mentioned the vampires and werewolves. When I first started reading this I thought that this would be a fairly realistic story, so when you mention ...

Hi adelina! I didn't read your first chapter, so I'm going to review this based off the context that you've provided in solely this. I don't know I can really ...

Hi alfred! This is really cute. Even though Christmas is over, it still very much feels like the holiday season to me- where I live, we just got a huge ...

I found this hard to get into. While you have a flicker of an idea here, I was distracted by two main setbacks. The first is your grammar and spelling. ...

I'm not really sure what you were going for here. You keep referring to "lovely", but I didn't get anything else out of it, really. You really cram in a ...

I'm not really sure what to say. Firstly, I apologize for making you wait so long to hear my thoughts on this story. I've underestimated you as a writer. You ...

Hi there! So I thought this was interesting. I don't see a lot of non-fiction pieces on this website, especially not ones that grab me as this did, so bravo ...

Hi Lauren, So, I haven't come across much of your writing before and I will admit that this was a real pleasure to read. You definitely a very talented author! ...

So, as I was reading your piece, I'll admit that it took me a little while to realize that the lake was the narrator of this piece. And I'll admit, ...

Hi. So, as someone who's watched a lot of short films this past semester for French class, I was trying to imagine this as a short film and I can't. ...

Hi, I think that this definitely starts off very well. I'm a huge fan of ominous dystopias and totalitarian governments; stuff like the Twilight Zone and the Giver. I thought ...

Hi, Macy! This is cool! The twist is sad, but I think it's interesting, considering you wrote about one of the most glaring plot holes of the Cinderella fairy tale. ...

Hi there! This is a pretty interesting piece. I think you have a really neat style and you did a good job giving this an ominous an eerie tone. Despite ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I think that you have a good start with this. The idea is intriguing and I think that you can end up in a pretty ...