Elinor

Hey niteowl, This is a really cute poem! It reminds me of the holidays and everything my family cooks around Thanksgiving and Christmas. It really evokes what it feels like ...

Hi, I'm not sure what this story is supposed to be about. You start off by describing a philosophical argument, and I'm thinking as I read that the main character ...

Hello, So, you most definitely have an interesting concept, and I'm curious to see where you end up taking it. It's chilling to think about - like something out of ...

Hi Emmy! This was a really good story. Like Tabitha, I was a little apphrenisive when I scanned its length, but once I started reading I was engaged until the ...

Hi, There are a lot of stories about vampires. A lot . Even though the Twilight craze has mostly faded, I think a lot of us are still stick of ...

Hello - From reading this, I don't get the impression that you have ever been to Las Vegas in your life. Perhaps you have and I apoligize if I am ...

Hi, This piece is very well-written. The imagery descriptive and really succeeds at putting me in a time and polace where dragons are real and thriving. That being said, I ...

Hi there! So. Unrequited love - it's an expierence that must happen to all of us at some point. As someone who's personally expierenced it, I know how painful it ...

Hello! This is a really cool essay. It was well written and you had a great sense of atmopsohere. Normally I get bored reading these kinds of things, but this ...

Snoink, I have returned to write my review of Chapter 3! The progression of events so far have had a really nice flow. If this was an actual, published book ...

Snoink. I don't believe I've told you that you are a good writer, and you need to publish this story, right? Rereading the first few chapters is making me remember ...

Snoink. You have no idea how happy this makes me. Since it's been a while since I read your last draft, so I can't really comment specifically on how this ...

Hi, I'm not really sure what to say about this. It's really short, so there's not really room for a lot of development. For what it is, it's well written, ...

Hi 787ellen! This was an interesting read. Like beckiw, what stood out the most to me in this short piece was your description. Throughout most of the piece it's pretty ...

Hi Charlotte! So, this was definitely an entertaining read. You're a talented writer, and since is the first chapter of a novel, I'm curious to see where these characters are ...