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Hi there, I liked this! It's certainly unique, and the story certainly flows well. I can tell that the subject is important to you, which makes connecting to it emotionally ...

Hi, I really liked this. I definitely got a Hansel and Gretel vibe from it, although I don't know if this is what you were going for, but the overall ...

Hi, This is a really interesting story, and I like the sense of atmosphere that you build up throughout. I had a really clear picture in my head of what ...

Hello, My first thought while reading was that this was going to be a story about transformation, about how finding where it is exactly you fit in and are meant ...

Hey there! So, I loved this short story. It's told very beautifully, and while I was hesitant about the switching from second person to first when I first clicked on ...

Hey there again! This was a nice little follow-up to the first part, and you've definitely begun to weave an interesting story. Your style is simple, sweet, and enjoyable to ...

Hey, So, this was cute and definitely an enjoyable read. It was definitely a nice mix of fantasy and modern day reality. I don't know if this what you were ...

Hey, This is really cute! I really enjoy both The Sound of Music and My Favorite Things as a song, and I thought did a really good job of portraying ...

Hello, Just a note, both for when you revise this piece and for anything else that you may write. Try to break this up into smaller paragraphs. Right now, a ...

Fortis! You did such good with this. Why didn't you submit to the radio show? I always love a good science fiction story, and this is no exception. I've read ...

Hey, Before I begin my review, a word of advice for when you submit future pieces. This was rather long, and while you held my attention until the end, you ...

Hello, This is quite the interesting poem! It's short and sweet, and I definitely sense there's a deeper meaning here, and I'm not entirely sure what that is. I like ...

Hey there! This is cute. I'm not really sure where you were going with this, but you write well and it was a quick and enjoyable read. I liked how ...

Hey there! I'll be the first to admit that I'm not the most musically inclined person, and that in my time I've read lets of lyrics that have fallen flat ...

Hello there! I love that you decided to try something new by writing this piece. I've found from my own writing that my best work comes from when I challenge ...