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Re: I Love You To Death
Hi there! I'm Ellie, and I'm here to give you a review. Conceptually, I liked this story. I liked how it started off as a fairly innocent story about a ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: [Review Contest] Vampire Script Part 5
Hey BlueAfrica! I'm so happy that you wrote a script and I am looking forward to giving you a review here. *rolls up sleeves* I'll admit that I'm not too ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: Love haiku
Hi Lele! I quite liked the central idea behind this haiku. I'm very compelled by the idea of love only being a dream for the subject. This is something that ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: Regret
Hi res! My name is Ellie, and I'm here to give you a quick review. I liked this short a lot. For being as short as it is, I think ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: Sweet Child
Hi, Megan! Ellie here to give you a quick review. I liked the idea of this poem, and I definitely think that some of your imagery here is really good. ...
Feb 2, 2018 -
Re: Motion
Hi Raven, Ellie here to give you a quick review. I love the concept of this piece. Before I saw note about the end I was able to discern that ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: I'm Leaving Home
Hi DemonGoddess! Here is your review as promised. I think this story has a lot of potential. I was interested to see what you would do with it since this ...
Jan 22, 2018 -
Re: Something With Penny Lane
Hi Flum! As promised, here is your review. I understand these are characters from a novel you wrote? I'm glad this contest gave you the opportunity to flesh them out ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Icarus Girl
Hey Wisteria! Here is your review, as promised. Judging this contest was super tough, as there were great moments in everyone's stories. Yours is no exception. I'm not sure if ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: c
Hey Lizz! Here's your review, as promised. I really liked this a lot and I had a really hard time narrowing down the top three. But I wanted to give ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Yesterday
Hey Wolfical! Here's your review, as promised! I was very interested to see what you were going to do with this song. I believe Yesterday is one of the most ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Defective Guardian
Hi, Holy! How is this still in the Green Room? Anyway, here is your review, as promised. Eleanor Rigby is a song with a lot of sentimental value for me, ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Defective Guardian
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Jan 21, 2018
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Re: A Day in the Life
Hey, Dark! Here's your review, as promised. One thing that fascinates me about A Day in the Life as a song is its composition. You have a central idea followed ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Stars
Hi, I think this poem is definitely effective at portraying the emotion. However, I do think you have a lot you could work with. But this is definitely a solid ...
Jan 20, 2018
