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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: I Love You To Death

    Hi there! I'm Ellie, and I'm here to give you a review. Conceptually, I liked this story. I liked how it started off as a fairly innocent story about a ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Script » Film, Supernatural Re: [Review Contest] Vampire Script Part 5

    Hey BlueAfrica! I'm so happy that you wrote a script and I am looking forward to giving you a review here. *rolls up sleeves* I'll admit that I'm not too ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love haiku

    Hi Lele! I quite liked the central idea behind this haiku. I'm very compelled by the idea of love only being a dream for the subject. This is something that ...

    Feb 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Regret

    Hi res! My name is Ellie, and I'm here to give you a quick review. I liked this short a lot. For being as short as it is, I think ...

    Feb 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sweet Child

    Hi, Megan! Ellie here to give you a quick review. I liked the idea of this poem, and I definitely think that some of your imagery here is really good. ...

    Feb 2, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Motion

    Hi Raven, Ellie here to give you a quick review. I love the concept of this piece. Before I saw note about the end I was able to discern that ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Realistic Re: I'm Leaving Home

    Hi DemonGoddess! Here is your review as promised. I think this story has a lot of potential. I was interested to see what you would do with it since this ...

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Something With Penny Lane

    Hi Flum! As promised, here is your review. I understand these are characters from a novel you wrote? I'm glad this contest gave you the opportunity to flesh them out ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Icarus Girl

    Hey Wisteria! Here is your review, as promised. Judging this contest was super tough, as there were great moments in everyone's stories. Yours is no exception. I'm not sure if ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: c

    Hey Lizz! Here's your review, as promised. I really liked this a lot and I had a really hard time narrowing down the top three. But I wanted to give ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Yesterday

    Hey Wolfical! Here's your review, as promised! I was very interested to see what you were going to do with this song. I believe Yesterday is one of the most ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Defective Guardian

    Hi, Holy! How is this still in the Green Room? Anyway, here is your review, as promised. Eleanor Rigby is a song with a lot of sentimental value for me, ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Defective Guardian

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    Jan 21, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A Day in the Life

    Hey, Dark! Here's your review, as promised. One thing that fascinates me about A Day in the Life as a song is its composition. You have a central idea followed ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Stars

    Hi, I think this poem is definitely effective at portraying the emotion. However, I do think you have a lot you could work with. But this is definitely a solid ...

    Jan 20, 2018


He who knows only his own generation remains forever a child.
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