Elinor

Hey! I really liked that this chapter was mostly the conversation between Micah and Summer (I almost called her Anna, lol) as that's where this story hits its stride. I ...

Hey there Liberty! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a quick review on this piece. From what I understand, this is a short piece about what your dream ...

AH THE PLOT THICKENS! Not too much to say here, as things are progressing nicely. May’s mouth drops open and a blob of cheese falls off her pizza and lands ...

Hey Carlito! Happy fourth! It's me again. I enjoyed this chapter, and thought the dynamics of each of the girls came across really well. They feel like real teenage girls ...

Hey Carlito! :D Happy to see more chapters of these posted. I've been really busy the past few weeks and I know this week is going to be busy for ...

Hey Corvus! I'm Ellie, and here to give this a review. I'm a screenwriter, and I love it when people post scripts on the site, so I was excited to ...

Hey Carlito! The catfishing finally begins, yay! I really thought things picked up and were very engaging once she finally started chatting with him. One quick thing that stood out: ...

Hey Carlito! Excited to be back here reviewing the next part of this. I think that overall, things are progressing very nicely, and I love that we saw a fully ...

Hey JJ! Elinor here to give you a review. I enjoyed reading this essay and thought that it was a timely and relevant issue. I was curious to know if ...

Hey JadeLous! Here's your review, as requested. I really enjoyed reading this poem, and it put a smile on my face. I know you said that you intended for it ...

Hey again Carlito! Once again, I enjoyed reading this chapter. One comment that I will make is that the character dynamics seemed very middle school rather than high school, and ...

Hey again Carlito! Like EternalRain said, I didn't feel like a lot happened in this chapter, so this review will probably be short. The one thing I really liked is ...

Hey Carlito! Back here for Chapter 2. I enjoyed reading this and seeing how the story progressed. I especially enjoyed seeing Summer interact with her sister. I think the key ...

Hey Carlito! I saw a few chapters of this hanging out in the Green Room and realized I've always wanted to read some of your writing. I think this first ...

Hey Silvermoon! I'm Elinor. Welcome to the site, and thank you for sharing this piece. I enjoyed reading it, and I hope I can give you some advice in hopes ...