Elfboy

Thank you so much Athena! This was my first visual poem, so . Thanks again!

Haha, thanks silver! I appreciate it!

Hey, thanks Penn! I'm glad you liked it, the review is much appreciated!

Thanks!

Thanks for yet another wonderful review! A lot of great tips/observations here, it's much appreciated as always. And I'll definitely tag you with part 4! Thanks for the encouragement.

Thanks again, Harry! Great feedback as always.

Thanks for another great review, Harry! A lot of great feedback, I'll make an edit for some of it soon. And yeah, it is rather short, that's one of the ...

Hey Harry, thanks for the review! Yeah, I am worried about the fact that they don't have any kind of scanner or Google Earth-style tech, because they're so advanced and ...

Hey, I'm glad you like it! Chapter one is here , and there's a prologue too. Thanks for reading!

Thanks Loonz! I like the idea of moving the "focus" around, I'll definitely play around with that. Also the period is a great point. And your feedback bout the "blank ...

Hey Mage! Thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it. I'll definitely add that period, that's a great point. Normally I use punctuation everywhere in my ...

Hey Haraya! Thanks for the review, it was very helpful. The reason I chose the words "sparkling rainbows" is because the other ideas are so alluring and beautiful, but when ...

I'm not going to review this because I have nothing to add, but this was too amazing to not comment on. Beautiful music, and the lyrics are very well-written and ...

Haha, I have nothing constructive to add, so I won't make this a review, but I really loved this poem! I wish it weren't so relatable though... Keep up the ...