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  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Relevance

    Hey there, Ethan here for another review! Another great poem here, I love the powerful words you chose, like ''sanguine'' and ''Machiavellian.'' I also felt that it flowed very well, ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Napo day#1: ode to a dragon

    Hey there, Ethan here for a review! This was a very good poem, and I appreciated the interesting rhyme scheme-- A-BB-A-CC-A-- so kudos to you there. That being said, the ...

    Apr 1, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Ugliest of Scabs

    I love Shakespeare almost as I love poetry, so I couldn't turn a blind eye to this one. And it didn't disappoint! I think you really captured a lot of ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: I Feel Colors

    Wonderful job, a very compelling poem. I loved the descriptions of the colors/emotions, and I think they tie together perfectly. I also appreciate the overall theme of the poem, you ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Other » General, General Re: TV

    This was a very interesting piece! I was intrigued enough that, if this piece were longer, I gladly would have kept reading. There were a few confusing bits, but I ...

    Mar 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    This is a beautiful poem, and one I can connect with deeply. You did a great job picking words that really resonate with the theme, so kudos to you! I ...

    Mar 29, 2020
  • Other » Fantasy, General Re: Small Excerpt From A Story I'm Writing...

    Hello, this is Ethan dropping a short review for a short piece. To start with, this is a great piece and definitely makes me want to read the rest of ...

    Jun 18, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Silver blade

    First and foremost, I just have to say... I LOVE flash fiction! And I must say, you have done an excellent job capturing the essence of a great story here. ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Squash

    Wow, quite an exposition as to the dark side of gardening. I have always thought that the eating of plants was just as bad as the eating of caged animals. ...

    May 21, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ticking Away

    Well, this is my first reveiw, so here goes! This is a beautiful poem, and I love the symbolism all throughout it. The regret of wasted time is something we ...

    May 21, 2018


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