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Re: Relevance
Hey there, Ethan here for another review! Another great poem here, I love the powerful words you chose, like ''sanguine'' and ''Machiavellian.'' I also felt that it flowed very well, ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: Napo day#1: ode to a dragon
Hey there, Ethan here for a review! This was a very good poem, and I appreciated the interesting rhyme scheme-- A-BB-A-CC-A-- so kudos to you there. That being said, the ...
Apr 1, 2020 -
Re: The Ugliest of Scabs
I love Shakespeare almost as I love poetry, so I couldn't turn a blind eye to this one. And it didn't disappoint! I think you really captured a lot of ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: I Feel Colors
Wonderful job, a very compelling poem. I loved the descriptions of the colors/emotions, and I think they tie together perfectly. I also appreciate the overall theme of the poem, you ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: TV
This was a very interesting piece! I was intrigued enough that, if this piece were longer, I gladly would have kept reading. There were a few confusing bits, but I ...
Mar 30, 2020 -
Re: Emptiness
This is a beautiful poem, and one I can connect with deeply. You did a great job picking words that really resonate with the theme, so kudos to you! I ...
Mar 29, 2020 -
Re: Small Excerpt From A Story I'm Writing...
Hello, this is Ethan dropping a short review for a short piece. To start with, this is a great piece and definitely makes me want to read the rest of ...
Jun 18, 2018 -
Re: Silver blade
First and foremost, I just have to say... I LOVE flash fiction! And I must say, you have done an excellent job capturing the essence of a great story here. ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: The Squash
Wow, quite an exposition as to the dark side of gardening. I have always thought that the eating of plants was just as bad as the eating of caged animals. ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: Ticking Away
Well, this is my first reveiw, so here goes! This is a beautiful poem, and I love the symbolism all throughout it. The regret of wasted time is something we ...
May 21, 2018
