Eimear

I'm in a state of utter bemusement as to what's going on, but I was very impressed with the prose and detailed description, so nice one! Keep on writing, Eimear

Oh dear, you're very right about the errors there! How embarrassing, I'll edit those fatal mistakes now. Thank you very much for your comment and time.

Hey, this is going to be a really quick review but I just had to drop in and tell you nice job! The imagery is spectacular and I really enjoyed ...

Hey, I liked this poem. So its not exactly moving, but I can really relate to what the poetic voice is trying to say, and understanding it sometimes hard to ...

Hey, thanks for all the great responses, especially the constructive criticism as this is my first attempt at writing this piece. Eimear

Mabye make it a tiny bit shorter? Otherwise, I liked it ok. Not traffic stopping, but good nonetheless.

Hey guys, thanks for the comments. On closer inspection your right about the piece being too short, so I'm gonna add a bit on. If my accent dips a little ...

Really good intro- didnt really like the middle bit but loved the end. I great insight into Mediation though! Nice job, keep on writing.

I think I've fallen in love with this poem. The imagery is simply brilliant and it carrys the enitre thing, leaving pictures in my mind. Nice job

Brilliant. I can't really add much to that. Well done.

Hey, I really like this! Not much to add, I love it the way it is. Great job for the 7th Grade!

Hey, I actually quite like this. Its a really gcod start, and its easy to read out loud (although, maybe the structure needs a little work) but I really like ...