Eimear

Hey, how's it going? Firstly, I want to thank you for posting this. If anything, I feel more educated on the subject of Tourettes. I didn't know what it was ...

Hello! I'm not sure if it was the angle you were going for, but this poem was strangely haunting. As well as many other things. You got a lot right ...

Hello! I love the way the two people above me weren't sure what you were trying to say. It means, in a round-a-bout way, that you're doing something right as ...

Hello! This was quite good. Just a couple of things I would try and improve on that would make your poems more accessible to people. Firstly, I'm not sure if ...

Hey Heather, how is life treating you? I love this! It's making me wish it was Halloween already. Spectacularly spooky. I like the way you don't oversimplify your work, some ...

The ironic and slightly cruel (but in a good way) feel to this is very good. The poem is original at it's best. I like the narrator's detached, almost reminiscent ...

I find a lot of writers want to start each new chapter with a new poem. I personally would opt for one entire poem and starting each new chapter with ...

Hello Kris darling! I'm sorry about being frightfully late at reviewing this- my excuse is school and family commitments. But now I'm here and better late than never as they ...

Hello! We've met before, haven't we? Well, welcome to YWS anyway. Hope you're settling in. It's great to see a lot of new poets treading these boards. Now, onto the ...

Awesome poem about fate and God. I really feel that. Hello! I'm Eimear.This poem is what I'd like to call 'in the process,' because I get the impression that it ...

Hello, I don't think we've met. Well I'm Eimear and I'm here to help instruct you. Don't worry, it's nothing awful, it just means that if you want I can ...

Hello! This is a fantastic piece. Really, I loved the atmosphere, your description and understand of memories, the images that your poetry sparked in my imagination. It reminds me of ...

Heya Kris! This is a very convincing piece. At the development- I actually began to feel real nerves for the the speaker because I didn't know what was going to ...

Hello! This is a very timeless subject that we poets like to use, yet you put your own subtle twist to it which made it very easy and enjoyable to ...

Hey Kris! Long time no talk. Apologies indeed. Ohh this is juicy. Is it meant to be called 'They' Gym? Did you mean The Gym or am I totally off ...