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ypu still got it, Sis. keep on writin it!

it just surprised me, that's all.

thanks Fontroy--Surreal, I made the changes you noticed, thanks.

lol, actually it srated out as just something he said--no real poetry, just his words! Very odd, and I thought they sounded poetic!

the fire scene was great! When you change perspectives, you may want to extend that particular scene, because the switch right now seems a tad pointless since its only seven ...

heeheehee....kalaban....I used to have a character named that! I have no clue where or when, but I did!!

Just kidding--here's more lol I fumbled around in the grass, looking for whatever it was I had fallen over. My hand ran over something round and smooth partially embedded in ...

I went through and updated everything you guys mentioned, as well as adding italics where needed and chagning Robert's name to Aiden. Bobo, I need his last name still. EDIT: ...

yup. Cool guy.

Thank you much, Trinity--though Now, in retrospect, I really and truly hate this poem. It disgusts me. It's a relievingly different style from my norm, but still muy yucky.

Well griffin, if you notice, I'm pretty sure Jack was writing this AS a fight scene, for practice...... And Jack--thanks much, with my record it porbably won't go anywhere, but ...

When I met Salvatore, he said he has more ideas for Drizzt stories than he has teeth (that's a lot). I assume there will be other books. I have heard ...

LIZ!!!!! Write more on this now or I'll throw you to Jinn!!

Thanks for the vote of encouragement, Mattie--I think Jack is avoiding me on the issue. :wink:

The Highwayman itself takes place in RA Salvatore's other realm, where his demon Cycle (I think) books take place. It's a pretty cool story, though he kills off too many ...