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thank you :) will try to do that ;] xxx

oh thank you for that!:) Actually, i didn't proofread this at all and so i forgot to edit out the commas, caps and all that jazz. But thanks for reminding ...

it sounded like something off of an emo song's chorus. it was that catchy. Prolly not the best you got so far, but it's stuck like Glue Gun on my ...

I envisioned a skinny Joe Jonas with undecided thin or think dark hue eyebrows. -_- I loved the last line though. ^^ CHASE

me sorry. I was half-assed freestyling this,, and usually, my drafts are poetic so when i haven't studied it up a bit it does suck, grammatically speaking. Even the punctuations ...

I lOVE IT YET AGAIN. wow. Breathtaking.

OMG. I freaking love it. 0.o I'm too choked up for words.

Oh btw, i disagree with those who've taken this as NOT a POETRY , for clearly everything could be considered poetry as a comment up here has pointed out. Just ...

Lol. I think you gotta read doble cara first, then this. Obviously coz this is the sequel. :p Anyway, thanks for the kind reviews :)

Make it longer, please? :P I'm seriously loving it!

OH AND I LOVE THE TITLE. Please leave it alone. 0.o :D

That last line there totally killed it. *Applauds* I'm crossing my fingers for a sequel. 0.o

Awwww.. The Lord as our saddle partner..I love it. :D

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! BRAVO!

Max is a darling! :)) I loved it. I won't even start on the typo's and capitalizations coz this is just too cute! Keep it up! ;D