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Well the poem is in a childish tone because the poet wants to go back in the past when the glass girl was not like how she is now. But ...

Thanks for the review! :-) And you are right I got to correct those lines and a few others now that I have read my own poem. And it was ...

Thank you so much for pointing out those things. You see I was writing it on the spot in the cellphone- on YWS directly so maybe I missed that out. ...

Thank you so much for pointing out those things. You see I was writing it on the spot in the cellphone- on YWS directly so maybe I missed that out. ...

Wow pretty awesome chapter you have here...you have left me speechless as I could see the scenes unfolding before my eyes as I read this...the bike chase was pretty cool. ...

Maybe its that but in a more altered way(?) Its not completely written form the anime. I have personalized it by altering and doing it my way. This piece was ...

Great! You got the poem how I wanted! :-) Thanks for reviewing! :-)

The ellipses were meant to be there like a pause of some sort. And as for grammar- pesonally I don't look at grammar in a poem when it makes sense. ...

The ellipses were meant to be there like a pause of some sort. And as for grammar- pesonally I don't look at grammar in a poem when it makes sense. ...

This is what I will call a sensible and whimsical piece of poetry!! Anyways this piece had to go through lots of typos and not workink line breaks and other ...

I know all that tit bits if stuff but I had to go through some technical difficulties and poor network and stuff. The thing is I posted this poem with ...

I know all that tit bits if stuff but I had to go through some technical difficulties and poor network and stuff. The thing is I posted this poem with ...

Whoa thats something intense going on in there! Well you did a good job on the description part! I have not read the other chapters and I am wondering Why ...

Whoa thats something intense going on in there! Well you did a good job on the description part! I have not read the other chapters and I am wondering Why ...

I was telling it will all be muddled up..hope this comment helps.. I won't be free Even if I wanted to be. I know whats gonna happen to me And ...