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Wow, that was a good load of nice poems you have in there. I liked the last stanza of the first poem. It was short, very descriptive and a really ...

Wow this is certainly a good one! liked it very much and yeah death looks like how you described it very white and graceful. Good Work!

Short and good I suppose but it is a bit vague but anyway it is good. But one thing, this piece of poem does not look like a piece it ...

I REALLY liked this poem and it kind of reminds me of a story which I used to hear a LOT when I was in elementary. Nice poem actually! And ...

Well, it was a VERY inspiring poem. I liked it very much but it was rather bulky and one would need lot of patience to read and understand that completely. ...

Well, that was one hell of a rap and let me tell ya, it was great. I liked everything except for the way how you divided it that is you ...

Well, I-AHEM!- know very well why you wrote that. Anyway, that was a nice-cute-expressive poem and i liked it. By reading the poem one can very easily get the picture. ...

It was a very nice poem. The darker shades of the poem is expressed very nicely. Also, the sadness of the poem went very nicely with the dark shade of ...

well, i liked thed the poem as it was very expressive. And, also I could see the sadness that has been expressed through the poem. But, you could have made ...

I liked this poem. You have expressed your feelings very nicely. I hope your friends will forgive you. Things such as this happen in life so don't get too serious ...

IT seems really to be a rather nice poem. I also liked the song version of the poem. Looks like you are really serious about this person. But no, I ...

Well, it was a very beautiful and meaningful poem. I liked it. you could have made it better by dividing it into stanzas and also like the title says "drunk ...