EPICnumber1

Thanks for those ideas and I think I might edit this a bit so everything isn't happening so fast. Thanks :)

Thanks for those pointers, will try to sort this out when I have time :)

Thanks :)

Thanks :)

any time :)

Aw thanks for that review Noelle I will fix those grammer mistakes the second I have finished some school stuff :)

Wow thanks for that :) by the way if you haven't read the divergent series you haven't lived lol :)

Aw thanks. I am not in the divergent club but I wrote this ages ago and has been a draft for ages so I just posted it but I never ...

Just... great. Loved it. Such talent yet so simple. AMAZING!!!! The only corrections that need to be made are the ones tat everyone has already said. Keep writing... -EPICnumber1

No problem if u ever need a review just ask this girl lol :-)

I sure can what is it called?

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Aw you are so kind but I bet you will be much more of a success because you have started young. You are so nice if you need a review ...

Thank you for this and I will certainly edit this because I was away for a bit on holiday but I am back now so I am editing all my ...

Thanks for this, that is the first review I have had at yws where someone has actually liked my work :)