DukeofWonderland

I don't, I sent a creepy stalker after a pretty girl. He says all these cheesy stuff to her, and she doesn't run away. How practical of me.

Why was the record never posted?

I stalked your portfolio :P

Lol, okay, shall check dates from the next time onwards :D

Oh no dear, punctuation is quite relevant. It tells the reader how you want the poem to be read, get it? And you're welcome, glad to help :D

I think if you put the 'can' on the 3rd line, it'd be better. :D

Ahuh, so then that's cool, your regular readers'll understand :D

I was speechless, until I'd seen what ... Baal here had said, and that ^ is a perfect description of how I feel.

Short comment: I adore your writing style! :D

I like the idea, and I'm looking forward to reading more. So do continue your experiment. Also, I find the names interesting. :D

Okay, this is clearly not a work. If you were hoping on some discussion on the topic of Sri Lanka then you could try posting it on the lounge or ...

Thank you. And that it's and its is an American/British English difference that I always get corrected in :P

Thanks. I'd like it if you explained that 'ending' concern of yours a bit deeper. That'd help :D

Thanks :)

Thank you :D