DukeofWonderland

I sometimes feel sick and tired of seeing my friends take on the road with courage and determination, A* diploma%u2019s in their clutches, on the way to glory, when%u2026I%u2019m left ...

I still don't get the title, probably coz I'm low on vocab- nehu. That could cause a bruise, right? will this be would, or is it a thought? shock each ...

Hehe...I'm reviewing a review. :D Newayz, I am also a Picoult fan and I read 19 minutes and Sister's keeper, amazingly beautiful stories by an awesome writer. And you're a ...

Well, I can certainly see that you are unhappy with your parents. Your expression, imagery, grammar, punction were all really good. I hope you are content with your work because ...

Kiran felt her heart drop into her toes as she stared at him- this sounded very....wrong for some reason. I like the imagery, just enough for me. And well good ...

Gazing into a mirror that’s cracked, I see a distorted reflection. This, I know, deep inside. But from the shallower walls Of my soul Come cries of pain at the ...

Your a new writer and your writing says that, though I don't know if it's supposed to be this way. Some of your statements were redundant or some words from ...

Great imagery but I still don't get the whole story. Descibe more at the beginnig and end to give your reader a clearer concept. the mid part flowed well. as ...

Well, first I'd like to say welcome. I'm sort of new too but I still think that I maybe able to help you, if you need any. The people with ...

Deception is here, Deception is there, Deception is with her, Is there a truthful place? I presume you are referring to Earth, then don't put a general word like place, ...

I hope I understood your poem's inner meaning because it looks.....deep and well expressed. The punctuation, grammar, and imagery, I guess, was very good. The flow and pace was nice. ...

I think the idea of poetr isn't exactly literary flow but it should feel flowing to the heart and mind and real poetry that comes from the heart has a ...

What can I do? Was I right? I made a choice -i thought it was right, The rhyming words are the same words, maybe if you changed the 2nd right ...

Quicker.Quicker.Candlelight Flicker.Tap.Tap.Footprint slap.Huff.Puff.Cough,cough, stumble!Spectacles tumble!Tummy rumbles. I think there should be a coma after each of the Quickers at the top. and Tap

Words take me happens all the time Words take me makes out the crime The 2nd statement makes words take me a noun, 1st one doesn't make sense as a ...