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Re: The Last Job - Short Story
Shane had been to the house once before, I i t was a few years ago when he was still a kid but he remembered it well. He knew the ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Homemade Devil
I love myself. I don't care about you. I'm very mean. So screw you. I like the beginnig- no, I love it :) I'm selfless. I'm wicked. You better stay ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Gayfriend. :3
I don't get your smiley:D that's all I know to give :D It's strange how amazing a person can make you feel. Who you talking about? btw, he doesn't care:D ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: The Well of Knowledge
Deeper than the ocean more solid than the earth K, this statement isn't as concrete as the first, the first comparison was perfect She was here before, brought forth in ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 17
Yes, you’re the rope, too--I think that’s important; you’re the force keeping me tethered where you want me to be, and not where I need me to want. I don't ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: The Physics of Me
Objects in motion stay in motion unless acted upon by an external force. Most people learn a variation of this law in Physics class, but I learned it differently. Judging ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Hummingbird
Unceasing motion- An impossibly urgent heartbeat compares only to the frantic beats that defy gravity with swift movements. I am going to asssume this is a blank verse, good flow ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Do it for mum
“Charge!” A line of horses disappeared. Fear, immortality and then the sheer need for escape. The heartbeat, I could feel it, throbbing. The last portion seems a little off I ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Legion
Ancient in days, spawned ere the dawn of man I think it's were, right? Princes of hell, these sons of none Abominations Still walking this realm, Lucifer’s first and last ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: College Life.
Somewhere in somewhere-land, the word seems weird at first read- maybe this’ll help lives a ponderous beach that I stumbled to cross on by.- the grammar and structure here is ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: A howler from Mars
hehehehahaha- I think my livers hurting, can't possibly be- no that's my kidney hurting. So yes you can see it was epicly hillarious and that's not very common in YWS ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Little Bird
I used to have friends, but now they are gone. Too direct And from all the money I had, now I have none. Same issue here I look at you, ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Why death if we all fight for life?
My name is Eileen Roberts. Two months ago I gave birth to a beautiful girl named Jordan. When I was 17 weeks pregnant, after a common ultrasound, the doctor told ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: So tired
This is my worst poem I've ever done. This is the worst poem I’ve ever done, or- this is my worst poem ever- grammatical errors I forfeit the concrete images ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Afraid of the dark
He woke up in the middle of the cold night on March 9 as if someone had just screamed in his ear. The description on this sentence was very long, ...
Sep 18, 2011
