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______________________________ PREFACE My body flirted with the shadows. One moment, I was in plain sight, easy to spot even in the shadows. Repetition of shadows not good!! Combine the last ...

Note: [u] My Father - much to our surprise , was back at work, much more concealed now. His company worked solely for Jewish people, before the war he had ...

Chapter 5 When they arrived at Coal Yard Lane, Mr Murdoch insisted on accompanying Anne back upstairs to her house. Henry made no move to second the offer, instead he ...

Ok, so I'll be the first to admit I didn't really get your whole poem. Which might just be because your target audience isn't 16 year old girls, or it ...

Chapter 4 Three weeks later... Anne draped herself over the wicker armchair and relaxed every single muscle in her body, breathing in and out as her chocolate this sounds a ...

I've edited the last chapter; and Anne has declined the offer of money, instead of accepting it. Did you do that because of what I said? :shock: Chapter 3 When ...

Ok, inhale, exhale...and review! Chapter 2 Anne walked briskly along the cobbled streets, holding her thin cloak tightly against her as protection against the biting October wind. She clutched the ...

Much Better! Now, for the review! Chapter One "Wake up, you urchin!" A rough voice with a heavy Northern accent grated Bane's eardrums as he stirred himself into conciseness. Did ...

It's pretty short. I wrote this in five minutes, so it's probably very bad, but I like it. Some parts anyway. Thanks ;) Before passing the threshold I shall thank ...

I'm not that familiar with mythology, so I might not undestand some parts of this poem, but I will review it none the less. The water from the river Styx, ...

In the corners of my mind Is the music, (sounds a bit off, maybe if there is music would sounds better) The haunting music, Of a string quartet. And when ...

It was another night. The streets were filled with people wearing jeans and hoods, and the night was shone I don't think the night was shone makes sense...I don't know ...

I love Philosophy! I basically got interested in it when I read Sophie's World, which if you like philsophy, is a great book to read! I'm taking Philosophy: Theory of ...

Gazing into a mirror that’s cracked, (like the cracked mirror bit, but do you gaze into a mirror? You look into something, or gaze at something. It just icks with ...

Have you read interview with a vampire? Because this reminds me a bit of that. In a very good way, of course. Now, it's pretty long and I can't be ...