DreamyAlice

Thanks for the review!!! All your crituques helped me a lot!!!

And I changed some things in the chapter, I hope it is good now!

Thanks!!!

I wanted to ask that if I am improving or not. And if the prose was okay

Thanks for the review! Your reviews are the best!

I have published the next chapter and I have tagged you too

Thanks for the review. It means a lot to me that you all read it. Hope you read the first and second chapters too

%u201CMr Bombur looks so sad, I can%u2019t see him like this. I have heard that the one who don't pay the taxes are severely punished. He rather get prisoned or ...

And you are going to love Kiliarn. I am so excited to write for him. Hope I finish the next chapter soon and publish it

I love your review. And I think the dialogue is my thing, I like to write dialogues so much and if you know your characters well, the dialogues automatically come ...

Thank you so much for reading it!

Thanks for reading it! I will publish the next chapter soon

Nice

Sorry I didn't knew that