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Re: Purple and Gold
This poem was so beautiful! The poems I have written till now are mostly narrative so I realized that I like narrative poems cause they are fun to read and ...
Jun 27, 2021 -
Re: 11.. 4.. 3.. - Chapter Two
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!! Plot- I have not read the first chapter so I probably don't know the plot well, but it looks interesting and I ...
Jun 5, 2021 -
Re: Dark Side of the Moon
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!! You write so perfectly, clearly and the prose is not shaky as far as I can see. The story is amazing and ...
Jun 4, 2021 -
Re: The Tales Of Derpy Link: Chapter 1 The beginning
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!!! Firstly, this story is amazing, it could make a good novel just lengthen it a bit a add details. The plot is ...
Jun 3, 2021 -
Re: I am Mari (Chapter 6)
Hey Momo, Alice is here to give a review!!! Such a great shock it is to know that that her..fiancée’s son but obviously not hers. You give us a good ...
Jun 2, 2021 -
Re: Course of Life
Hey Hkumar, Alice is here to give a short review! Ahh Such beautiful lines, great imagery, you do such a wonderful job of conveying really intense emotions through poems. Everything ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: love
Hey, Alice is here to give a short review!!!! First of all, welcome to young writer's society (YWS), hope you jave a great time here! You look heartbroken, cause it ...
May 23, 2021 -
Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 6
Hey pineapple, Alice is here to give a short review! Whoa! You write so elegantly, your writing flow is perfect. As I have not read the starting chapter, I am ...
May 17, 2021 -
Re: The Killings of Nathaniel Rake. Chapter 1
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!! SUGGESTIONS ~I think you did a lot of mistakes in capitalization, like in these- All the While The Killer got away. Earlier ...
Apr 14, 2021 -
Re: Tuesday
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!!! (Probably after a long time) It was a good read, I rarely come across peaple who are dying for perfection, I am ...
Apr 13, 2021 -
Re: ch 2: A sudden shock
Hey Alice is here to give a review!!! So I think I missed this chapter too of this novel ,it was great. And by the way you should chose a ...
Feb 27, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 5
Hey Hannah, Alice is here to give a review!!! Just like MailicedeNamedy I also didn't expect this chapter to be like this, I thought it was going to be about ...
Feb 25, 2021 -
Re: The Wedding Guests
Alice is here t ogive a review!!! It was such an amazing read. Your writing style is marvellous I didn't get bored throughout the story. The dialogues were nice and ...
Feb 24, 2021 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 11.1
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!! He’d been caught several times. Each bounty hunter had their own way of doing things. Clandestine is worrying for nothing you can ...
Feb 23, 2021 -
Re: Ch 10: The poem competition: concealment of the truth
Hey, Alice is here to give a review!!! I think I missed this chapter of your novel, so here I am to review it! It was a unique way to ...
Feb 22, 2021