Dreamy

Hi, 'Time jump' is a very good title. Mostly a story with this genre is narrated with the boy as it's first person,so I like your change,you know not being ...

Hi, I really liked this, this made me read up your previous part too. I don't know whether you have given introduction to this story, if you didn't,give it a ...

Hi, Straight to the point. This is an very good piece of work. I really loved it. It was very lyrical. And you have done a good job in not ...

Hi,straight to the point, though I haven't read your previous chapter I was able to understand the story. This story has got nice vibe to it. And it's very clear ...

This is really good. With all the commotions and life threatening situation Tai was worried about wearing a see through dress was really hilarious. But repeating it often was not ...

Hi, straight to the point. This story made me remember my school days where we use to play that game of crows, though I don't know what happens for six ...

Hi,straight to the point,though I haven't read your previous chapter, I could say what was happening. There wasn't any mistakes of suck kind, just a few comas. That's all. It ...

Hey, Dragon! Though I haven't read your other two chapters, I can totally understand what is going with the 'main character'. This has got nice vibe.There wasn't any mistakes of ...

I loved it. To start with, this is really an "Ode to theatre". I really liked the way you have formatted your poem. Your's description of the stage and the ...

This is such a nice view of explainnig ourself to the elderly people :P . I didn't find any mistakes in your view of the fears in becoming an adult ...

This is a good work. I liked it.The feelings of the characters are said in a very beautiful manner, I almost visualised the scenes in my head.What I felt absured ...

Wow, this is just great. I really liked it. There is no huge mistakes as far am concerned. It is also ryhming with good selection of words. Your feelings is ...

I've read your previous chapter too. But I think that this chapter is far better than the previous one. I really like the way you have put it. It has ...

I really liked this poem. So well said. Though it has very few mistakes. 'Can't be broke by a sounds" You could've said, 'Can't be broken by sounds' or 'Can't ...

When I first read the dialogue of an cat, I had to re-read it to see if it was a mistake. But the elephant with drawn hand, I figured that ...