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Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This was indeed a very good teen love story. It was a bit cliched, but you pulled it all really well. I can't find ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. "Adroit" I don't know what it means but it is simply intriguing. I like what you have shown in this post. Your descriptions about ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review, this was well-written story. I liked it. Wicked and wicked witches alwasy amuse me. This chapter was well crafted and nicely narrated though I ...

Hey there, Dreamy here to review. I first read this, I was so very pleased and intrigued that I so badly wanted to know what happened I ended up your ...

Hey there, Dreamy again to review. :P I liked the story so far. It is not lagging or boring. I suggest you to make all these chapters into one (maybe) ...

Wow, now it all make sense. Man, you are good. This is a fast moving story like a pacer, and now I understand the title "The Chaser" ;) And let ...

Hey there, I'm confused and you are so not responsible, I should've read your previous chapters. But then, it was clear that Benji wanted to kill someone and the assassin ...

Wow, that was just so cool. I didn't read your previous chapters, maybe now I will do. Your character, Fiera, I can see a typical girly-ness in her. She is ...

Hey there Gigi, Dreamy here to review. Wow man, you are good in what you do. And I'm serious. You are a very good writer, a good narrator as well. ...

Hey there, first of all welcome to YWS. Hope you are having a great time here. "Slit" is a very intriguing title. It's not very often that I read a ...

Hello there, Dreamy here to review. This was nicely plotted and I liked the plot. All you need to do is some edit and re-view it for yourself. This way ...

That was fan-tas-tic! Hey there, Dreamy here to review. You are so good! I mean, I've got nothing to complain about. The plot, the starting line and the story itself ...

Hey there Stor, Dreamy here to review. This was interesting piece. Though you got some past and present tense problems. Let me just point out the typos and the tenses ...

Hey Unconsoled, that's a funny and interesting name just like your story. I kind of liked your story, it was bit more like a dark comedy. The thing that went ...

Okay, Alex! First of all, welcome to the site. Hope you are having a nice time here. Urm, just like as Raven said, it made me wonder what you had ...