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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: 02-Things can ALWAYS get worse

    Hello there, Dreamy here to review. This was a good read, quite interesting. I liked the pace of the story. You were not in a hurry which is a really ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Oblivious Heart

    Hello there, Welcome to YWS!!! :D This story was really intriguing. I liked all the parts of the story and I liked the way how you have jumped from one ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: House of the rising sun chapter 5

    Hello! Dreamy here to review. Okay, this was very good. Better than all the other chapters. The good thing is, you are growing as a better writer. Yay! *claps* The ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: REMOVED...

    Alright, cool! I'm reviewing the same work twice. *grins* I've never done this before but for a fellow countryman. :P Alright I see you have made a very few corrections ...

    Feb 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: REMOVED...

    Hello there, Dreamy here to review. From what I've seen in your works so far, I learnt that you are trying to create a new "trend" in narrating your stories. ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: The Perfect Thief

    Hello there Gaurav, Dreamy here to review. Man, that was humorous. I liked it thoroughly. I didn't chuckle or giggle, I actually laughed at Sushant's escape they were crafted really ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Shadow Keepers: Section, Part 1

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. At first I was hesitant to review this piece, since I'm not good in first-person narrative thing. And to my surprise this is also ...

    Feb 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: House of the rising sun chapter 4

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. Okay, this was a very short chapter as I told you before. The good things about the chapter is that, it is very fast ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Psycho Chapter One

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. Ah, you are so good! I liked the write up very much. You are a good narrator. And the story was intriguing. You have ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mrs. Nova

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. So, you have a very good storyline. And like all the writers you got the same problem. You got the start, the middle and ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, General Re: I'm not ready

    Hey there Bol, Dreamy here to review. You are good, ya know? And you are a good narrator. And this piece didn't fail to surprise me though it was cliched ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Arthur's Showdown, Part III

    Hello there again, Dreamy here to review, I beginning to think that you are face palming. :P So this is it. This was the first part I began to review ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • » Re: Arthur's Showdown, Part II

    Hello there, Dreamy here again to review. An action sequence. I just love to read actions, it creates such vivid scenes and imagination. I guess, action is one of the ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Arthur's Showdown

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. It is a very intriguing piece, very well formatted. I liked it thoroughly. I don't know why, but reading this made me think that ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Fate Of The King of Cobras

    Hey there, Dreamy here to review. This was indeed a fun story, because I hate snakes and seeing it die was kind of fun. o.o The plot was really intriguing. ...

    Jan 23, 2014


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind