Dreamwalker

Nice edit :D Okay so I'll give you a few quick nit-picks but nothing crazy. However the coffee shop was all they had, Claire had her friends and Paul had ...

Thank you all for your wonderful reviews :D. And it will help me out a lot! Just a few things I would like to point out though.. For example, I ...

Thank you both for your reviews, and thank you kindly for your pointers, griffinkeeper :D. I initially went out to give a more duratic monologue as I had originally planned ...

I'm not going to lie... I hated every minute of it. It is not my favourite by Fitzgerald... and by far the most dull. I dont know about you but ...

I sort of skimmed the first chapter but I never really went into details and secifics with it. Maybe I'll do that now.. :D Other then that, Peave From Dreams ...

Thank you all kindly for your reviews and it's really nice to know that I did well. I loved the people who really full-out critiqued me, but the simple reviews ...

Thank you so very much for your review! I'm definitly going to use this to help me better myself as a writer :D

*also clicks star*

No Incog, you do not use enough comma's ;) Yes I'm allowed to say that cause she's my baby sis XD

Thank you all so very much for your reviews and I will try and work my hardest to straighten out these kinks in my writing style :) Very informative and ...

Again thank you all so very much for you reviews and time! It's really a confidence boost having so many wonderful reviews and I'm glad you all told me of ...

thank you all for your reviews!

Okay so this story has a TON of potential. It's very close to my heart to hear a story like this because it is very uncommon and one of my ...