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Re: One Touch: Prologue
Hey there, I'm The.Dreamwalker and I'm hear to review your work :D. You can call me dreamwalker or DW if you'd like or basically anything for that matter. Those two ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: The Awakening...
Hi there :D. I am The.Dreamwalker, at your service. Most people call me dreamwalker or DW but you can call me whatever you like and I'm here to critique your ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Poem for a Fallen Soldier
From what I can tell, in a critical stand point, there are a lot of started rymnes and such but they arent completed and it's as if you couldnt find ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Kiss of Fate - Chapter One
Hey there. I'm The.Dreamwalker and I will be your critiquer for this evening :D. Pleasure to meet you ask well. As is always, I start of with my critique then ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: The Wingless Girl
Hey there :D. It's Dreamwalker here as asked, with a wonderful review that will hopefully help you out. Boy this piece is long! More fun for me :D. As I ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: And there was drum roll chapter 1 part 2.
The.Dreamwalker here with just a few nitpicks on this one :D. The commander saluted with a hand raised forward “Understood! Your lordship.” A period is necessary after forward. The chatted ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Life After Death part 1
Hello Shaelieh, I'm The.Dreamwalker and you are my 70th review! My teeth slowly sinking into the bloodstream, draining the very thing that kept the horrible rhythm of the heart beating. ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Let me be {Prologue}
Hiya Kat. I know this is kind of like graving digging.. but I'm going to review this piece anyways! Oh and I didnt really take the time to read the ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: "Witch" Chapter 1 EDITED
I'm not going to critique this at the moment, due to the fact that I am quite critiqued out.. :P. Still, I'll give you my general opinion. Okay, so this ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Let me be {1}
Hiya Kat :) This is Dreamwalker with a review :). And it looks to be the first review so far, of course if no one else is doing this at ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Three
Hiya Lucy :D It's Dreamwalker with your review and I'm truly excited about this one by far. So as is my latest way of critiquing, I'll do my critique the ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: Witch - CH3 and CH4
Hi Wiccaryan :). It's Dreamwalker again here with another review. This one will be a little different but hopefully it will help :). All the things that are in red ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Witch
Hiya! Dreamwalker here with one review as promised :D. Okay so first off I always start with my critiques, like picking out things you may find appealing to fix. Then ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Being Me (part 2)
Hey Kamas :) it's Dreamwalker here with another review for you interesting story ^^. Okay, first off, if I was in your position, I would think it best to maybe ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: The Piper Legend (Prologue~Edited)
Hi there Forever Threnody :). It's Dreamwalker here with a review as promised! Okay so first of all, my critique! Dun dun dunnn... just kidding :D. joyfully and nonchalantly I ...
Apr 10, 2009