Dreamwalker

Pretty much sheer godliness. I love how freebased this poem is, though usually I don't care so much for non-rhymning, unbalanced poems. In this case, though, your descriptions and use ...

Alright, Dream here with a review as requested! (thank you ;D) Okay, so because this prologue is pretty short (prologues are usually short anyways), I'm going to slim my five ...

Hey there! Dream here with a review, as requested! So, since this piece is pretty big, I'll give it my five sectioned review ;D. It consists of; Grammar and Punctuation, ...

All all honesty, when I read this, I didn't take it as a poem. Because the form is pretty much just spacing your sentences out in a way that doesn't ...

Dream here, as requested! Okay so I got really excited when I started reading this piece because it has form which is awesome! I love form ;D. Okay, now on ...

Hey there BookCutie! So, one thing I will definitely get at before I start this little critique thing is how very short this poem is! I know when I write ...

All I have to say is 'wow', a lot happened in this short little piece! By the way, I'm The.Dreamwalker and I'm going to review your piece today! Since its ...

Hey there! I'm The.Dreamwalker, but most people call me Dream, and I have yet to have the pleasure of reviewing one of your pieces. So, here it goes! My mother ...

Hi there! I'm The.Dreamwalker and I'm here to review your piece today! I laugh and I cry

Hey there DismantleRepair (I like the name! Very Anberlin of you ;D)! I'm The.Dreamwalker though most people just call me Dream or Walker, and I'm here to review you piece ...

She sits with an idle brain,

Son of the moon That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire

Because this is more of a retelling of events that have happened to you in your dreams, I can't really give it the 'Plot, Setting, Character, Grammar and Punctuation review. ...

here I am,

Hello there! So I'm going to do a really quick review for this piece because its rather small. That being said, I'm going to skip my four usual categories, replacing ...