Dreamwalker

Walker here with a review as requested! So instead of beating around the bush, lets get this show on the road. Personally, I love stories about characters with flaws. Deep ...

I noticed your post in the poetry forum and decided I would take a look for myself. Of course, as much as I love poetry and anyone who puts the ...

Death. An interesting subject. I'm an avid fan of literature that takes on such a deep matter simply because it is something that people fear. It is the ultimate unknown. ...

Razzy, I'm going to be brutally honest with you on this one only because I thought it best to do as such. I prefer you as a prose writer over ...

I fear I may have to disagree with you. I suppose you are correct with Ella Enchanted, but the fact is that that movie didn't have all that great of ...

I will disregard the comment about not understanding simply because this is a good piece of poetry. What I will say, though, is that poetry does not need to be ...

Honestly, I can't believe how much it astounds me that someone so young could take on such a heavy subject with such grace. And without melodrama. I expected this would ...

You know, Lumi, this poem has officially made me contradict myself on a certain point. This may be my favorite and yet least favorite piece of poetry I've ever read ...

Ah, I'm actually rather excited about this piece! Now, first off, I'd like to note that you're already on your way to becoming a fantastic poet. You're creating metaphor where ...

I look forward to your poems. From start to finish, you grasp this extended metaphor and use it to create a sense of sadness or excitement, or really anything at ...

Alright, so the first thing I noticed about this piece was that it had rather childish undertones. That whole lack of trust. That whole 'this is extremely easy for most ...

Right from the start, my first instinct was to say that this would be a lovely piece of prose. Narrative poetry should tell a story but it should not simply ...

Generally speaking, emotional pieces are the easiest to write and usually the easiest to relate to, but when it comes down to it, they also need to have a great ...

Hello there, Devan! And, might I add, what an intense piece of fiction! It definitely left an impression on me so I give you a big thumbs up on that. ...

Hmm, I'm curious as to why your decided to put this in Lyrical Poetry. As interesting as it is, it definitely tells a story as opposed to something that is ...