DreamsRain

I don't know why, but I went back to change it and in the edit, there were spaces between those words but for some reason they did not continue into ...

Thanks that measn a lot and i hope i can continue to improve this until it reaches the level that i hope it will

Oh this poem is really sad yet really pretty. It has a good rhythm and beat. Good placement of words and quotations. You can really sense that the boy is ...

Thank you for the tips, I was just really lazy and didn't feel like capitalizing, so sorry about that lol. I did fix it and was hoping for some more ...

This poem is pretty, but the begining, i thought was a bit bumpy and didnt really flow together. I love the song reference though, cause i love that song. Just ...

your poem i think is funny and adorable, i really love how you have kinda to things clashing. like her feelings and his actions.

your poem is very sad and heart touching, I like to write poems but mine are not this good