DreamerBidi

Good one!

It was fun to read :D

Great poem.. I especially like the ending. :)

First of all,thanks for the review. And you're right about the commas and exclamation point...I too realize it now. I'll try to improvise it and minimize the errors.

First of all,thanks for the review.. I think you're right about the commas is indeed very awkward to read. I'll try to work on that. And by "that still clings ...

Beautiful poem :) . I especially loved the last line ..

thank you so much for your review and your kind means a lot to me :D

First of all,thanks for your review. I'll try to write poem without rhyming next time.. It's just that I've always written my poems in the form of rhymes since I ...

Hey,I felt like you wrote my thought out! This is exactly what I think... I hate the hypocrisy.... I thought I was the only one with this opinion, but hey ...

I am new to this, I just joined here... Your poem was the first one I read here and I really loved and enjoyed it .