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Re: Mirage
Hi emmylou1995,DK here with review on your fantastic poem! Very interesting poem and diction are impressed in my mind. You really talented and I was clearly jealous of you!It is ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Saturday Night
Hi DrStrangelove,DK here with review on your poem. So first of all,what I like about your poem is, the ideas that originality comes from yourself.your writing style is certainly appropriate ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Just like You
Hi arianaSarroyo,Knight Althur here with review on your poem! A very meaningful messages here :) . You are certainly concerned about the environment. There's not much I want to say, ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Sweatshops
Hi fortis,here I am to make my review on your poem :) Agree with Knight Messenger here,but I would like to give some about what I like in your poem.I ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Lost in the Wind
Hi fortis,Knight Althur here with review! -Lost in the wind-The title caught my eyes,so I decided to read the contents and messages you want to point up here. You use ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Repaid
Hi Sassykat,DK here with review on your poem! I really interested in the classic style of writing poems especially with William is apparent in the poem you have something like ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Empty 3
Hi Bloodink,DK here with review! This poem is certainly different! Unpretentious and relaxed writing style.Not difficult to understand, but I'm not sure about the theme?You're probably talking about l
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: Twisted
Hi Picklesole,DK with review here :) Not mean to be rude, just giving constructive criticism here :) First of all, I really like to find the root behind every poems ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: The Seasons
Hi Liaya,DK here with review. I totally like the first stanza and the ideas you pointed up in each stanzas with a beautiful diction. # Spring, like a child singing,-->I ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: Mr Mime
Hi InfinityAndBeyond,DK here with review. First of all,I really like your poem here.Very well-written and indeed fantastic diction! Your poem tells the story of 'I' that stuck in her( I ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: Miss Right
Hi arif,DK here with review. This poem has a 'target' was intended to convey to the reader in a narrative form. I just want to show a little here that ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Four, Part Two
Hi Shadow,DK with review here.(Your biggest fan) ;) This chapter is getting more interesting and 'threatened' me with a scene in the story. Especially the scuffle between her and Aldik.But ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: My own mind
Hi WritersUnleashed,DK here with review. Your poem is kinda short but you filled it with your own thoughts.That is what makes it powerful and strong.Just a few things here is ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Sons of Courage Book 1 Chapter 5 Delivering the baby; Recsuer
Hi Knight Messenger,DK here with review on your novel for chapter 5. First of all,I think this part needs some improvement in term of delivering an effective story to the ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: An El Salvador Halloween
Hi badhabit1,welcome to here with review on your story. I see what you trying to convey in your short is quite interesting and wonderful to read.This story is about a ...
Oct 4, 2013
