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Knight of the Dark

  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: How does giving up smoking affect lives?

    Hi Deanie,DK here with review on your essay. Your essay is very interesting and full of knowledge about the benefits that we can get when quitting smoking. It is a ...

    Oct 10, 2013
  • Other » General, Dramatic Re: words

    Hi herbgirl,DK here with quick review on your poem. Way of delivering the poem is like talking to the reader. It gives questions then reply with your own views. What ...

    Oct 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Road Once Traveled

    Hi Zecru,DK here with review on your poem. I do not know what to do with the numbers, but I think it's unique and it makes sense.Your diction is very ...

    Oct 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Friend

    Hi Morticiansdaughter19, you caught me with your poem!So I come to give review. I thinking about my shadow, and this poem is definitely about your own shadow? The concept is ...

    Oct 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: Am I, the madman?

    Hi Crowley, DK here with review on your poem. Your poem is exciting and full of questions. It is a cynical tone and dissatisfaction with the views of others to ...

    Oct 10, 2013
  • Other » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Reed and Felix

    Hi naominana,DK here with review on your short-story. First of all,I like the way you describe Reed here as a beautiful girl (to me) and Felix.Not much story about them,you ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sons of Courage Book 2 Chapter 1 Cloaked figures; fire!

    Hi TheMessenger, DK here with review on your fantastic story with this chapter. Your writing style becomes more and more enthralling through this chapter, plus details on the mood and ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Piano Is Black

    Hi abnat22,DK here with review on your poem. I really like your writing style in this poem. That is, it was so poetic and vibrate in my soul when I ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sorry....

    Hi defyingravity01,DK here with review on your poem! A simple poem but certainly full of implied meanings. The tone and rhythm are perfect and I can read smoothly without wondering ...

    Oct 9, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Yes.

    Hi MysteryMe,DK here with review on your fantastic story. What I am impressed with this story is that the message conveyed and interesting writing style. Ways of communication with a ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Hope- A Solicit Sight.

    Hi rbt00,DK here with review on your wonderful poem. I like your views on the hope and define its meaning as a 'solicit sight'.Each line of shows what the hopes ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Don't Try Too Hard To Be Something You Are Not.

    Hi rbt00, DK with review on your awesome short-article. Such things often become a trend of people, especially youngsters. I agree with the article that you have written. Although this ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: From Us Teens

    Hi Wonder,DK here with review on your song lyric. Since I do not know how to sing it and I think you left a note that is extremely cute, I'm ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Cassis poem

    Hi noelsugarcube,DK here with review on your poem. Your poem is indeed different from the others romance poem I have ever read. It is a reality that ever experienced as ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Anymore

    Hi SecreteJournalist,DK here with review on your poem. I really liked your poem. Full of feelings and emotions boil over, but can be well controlled in every verse. It's easy ...

    Oct 8, 2013


no i prefer gay chaos
— hop