DreamGalaxy

God I hate the voices!

Wow! This is a really amazing piece. It brings out the real eeriness of a carnival and it seems to com pare it to someone like a (I'm gonna be ...

I really tried, I really tried to add in commas, but half way through, I thought they made my poem look really ugly. So I decided against it, but hey, ...

Was extremely difficult to write, tried to capture bits of reality and romantic fantasy.

I really tried to capture the way my friends would have felt....trying to practice my empathetic skills in poetry.

wonderfully creepy...:)

so sweet...made me think of something special...

Amazing I really love these Dark poems that make you feel the emotions portrayed......Amazing..

LOL I know it's kind of creepy the way I just put that.

I really loved this, it makes the insanity of this world sound so beautiful

Again, this is just so beautiful in it's own way...

Awww thanks, it's great to know there are other totally insane people like me! :)

Wow I am stunned, I just loved it and I can't explain what! Perhaps it is the fact that it reflects reality so well The emotions come through well, seems ...

Awwww this reminded me of the time my parents taught me to ride a bike....and it was in England (memories....)

I love the feelings of intense sadness and there's just something else about it....something that I can't put into words. That look at me now feeling.....(sorry it sucks but that's ...