My love, try to understand me when I say you mean nothing to me.
With your beauty, your body, and its poisonous perfection
It was hard to say no.
My dear, try not to scream at me when I say you were part of my collection
Of women I persuaded, of women I desired
To make me feel whole.
A fun riot, an unhealthy habit
With the sway of your hips
Was it your heart I stole?
Are you happy now?
That I'm left with no one
A fish lost in the sea
I guess I deserved this
I hope you were worth it
For the punishment of this disastrous deed
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Again, this is just so beautiful in it's own way...
It's not much. I wrote this (again) a while back when I first started high school. The poem kind of explains what happened there