Dragongirl

Ok, I just finished part 1 and part 2 and let me just say......Hahahahaha!!!! Hilarious! Loved this. Randy and Bill are just so funny. My favorite line from part 1 ...

Wow, Bridget is very witchy. Nice job on her, she is a very interesting character. I thought it was funny how she hates her body and that is the main ...

Not entirely sure what I think of this. It is well written, but....There is a lot of things I didn't like about it. Number one being the swearing. Come on, ...

I smiled the whole time I read this short story (if you can call it that.) I've never read anything like it and frankly, my friend, I loved it. :) ...

Hilarious!!!! I found this genuinely funny and extremely refreshing. You put what everyone is thinking into a great snappy poem. Very nice job. I totally agree with the message you're ...

Love it!!!!! I don't normally like poetry that doesn't rhyme, but this one....I got to hand it to you.... It rocked! The first two lines had me hooked from the ...

Reading this I chuckled. I liked the way you just sort of slammed the words out there, and because this poem is the way I've been feeling all day, I ...

Hmmmm...Intriguing. I don't normally like romance novels but I think you that you might have me hooked with this one. Anyway, I noticed a couple misspelled words. "Then why are ...

Not too shabby... This is an interesting story. I don't really know what to make of it, but I think it is well written. The only thing that I don't ...

Well said! I LOVE this. I think you pretty much nailed it right on the favorite lines... And love is definitely not fifteen minutes of sweaty bliss Love is sacrifice, ...

, whisper the truth is out there. I like the message you have going here. ' Be your own person.' Very true. I attached this this quote, not only 'cause ...

Well done! Like the first verse, like the third, the second one, however, doesn't really rhyme. Always expecting failure, And when you succeed it's a surprise, Pull back the curtains, ...

Other than having no morals what so ever, this story rocks! I love your style. the captain is as cold and black hearted as a pirate captain should be, and ...

Neat idea. Son of a dragon, cool. Definantly a lot you could do with that. I like Shadow, he's cute. The only thing is he is a little too cute. ...

Interesting........Way too short. That's what comes to mind after reading this piece. I like Merrym and despite the fact that Luca doesn't say a word, I find myself liking him ...