DragonGirl11

Hey HT! Thank you so much for the review :3 I was actually debating ending every line with a period for exactly the reasons you mentioned, but I thought there ...

Thank you very much Kyllorac :) I will definitely keep the meter in mind the next time I write lyrics.

Thank you very much! This was my first attempt at lyrics so I am very grateful for your feedback.

Haha, I thought you might approve of the sheep verse xD It's supposed to be from the perspective of the good guy, fighting only because the bad guy is oppressive ...

Sure! As long as you let me know what it's like afterwards. A video would be great, or sheet music if you do things that way haha xD

See, look. I messed half of it up with a typo in one of the quote tags :S

Umm... okay... If you say so. I didn't even think of the Hunger Games when writing this. I'm not even a fan. I've only ever read the first book... But ...

Hey now, don't go knocking dragons ;) (Might I direct you to Job chapters 40 & 41, where the creature Leviathan sounds a lot like either a T-rex or a ...

Quite possibly my favorite of yours so far, although somewhat confusing.

Thank you very much, Jas. I guess I needed that. I had originally named Jumo Lidsay, I guess I forgot to change it - oops! Right, major proofreading and whatnot ...

Yaaaaayy more happiness! I like this one a lot more than "Long Distance" :)

Hey! Do I spot a happy poem there at the bottom? Well now. Good for you :)

Thank you!

Thanks, everyone! I appreciate your input, and I'm making some changes accordingly. ~DragonGirl