Dracula

Hey, Stegosaurus! I'm here to write a review which will hopefully help you in some way. :) when he dropped the eraser as an attempt to fix a problem. The ...

Wow, I think it's awesome that you think about your old characters! I should do that more often... I wonder what they would be doing today? *puts thinking cap on* ...

Reading the poem description, I have to say this: The modern world is like that, people have been 'brainwashed' to believe that everyone should be this ideal human, that you ...

Hey, basia! I don't think I've said hello yet, so here's a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society. :D I'll quickly get through the nitpicks, then I'll write an ...

Hey, SteveDaMan! I bet you didn't expect to get a review this quickly. Woah, your first poem is amazing! I love the imagery you used, I can imagine it all ...

Hey, BlueDaisy! I'm here to review... obviously. :p And even if you swim as hard a s you can-- Just a nitpick, you've got one too many spaces. I really ...

Hey! I suggest you post each chapter as a separate work, you're bound to get a lot more reviews that way. Anyway, I'll have a go and read as far ...

There's no need for introductions, so I'll get straight into the review. :) I couldn't BELIEVE that Luke lied that he was sick and now he got first place in ...

Hello, lexydeluca! Welcome to the Young Writers Society. :) You've got a nice story coming along here. In this chapter, I got to know Kevin reasonably well. I get the ...

Here I am! :D But totally not on my case, Totally not in my case. All these words are confusing, I know, it's so easy to get them mixed up. ...

Hey, MrMuddyPig, Dracula is here to review. :) I was originally just going to review the second chapter, in the Green Room, but I thought I should read this chapter ...

Haha, I noticed that your username had jelly in it... and your avvie... you must LOVE jelly! So do I, raspberry jelly ftw. So I'm not really sure how to ...

Hey, Kathryn! Welcome to the Young Writers Society, I hope you're enjoying yourself so far. :) Your writing style is unique (and that's not a bad thing). Personally, I read ...

I love this poem and hate it at the same time. I am like that little ship (Yes, I typed ship. Obviously I meant sheep, but because this poem is ...

Hey, Artemis! :) after Silena had given Sammy a sounds scolding about moving Monopoly pieces, Sound doesn't need an S. And of course Leia won. Just when they had finished ...