Dracula

Hey there, TheLeakyPen! I hope you don't mind that I haven't seen the previous 2 installments, that just means my review will be more on the writing style and flow ...

Hey there, VegasLights. :D Growing up was hard for me, in fact, I still am. This first line needs a bit of work. The subject of this sentence is the ...

Here I am. :D She would surely fool anyone who saw her into thinking she was a man. Yep, there's no need to tell me that this makes Allie very ...

Hey there, DreamingForever. :D I was going to review part 2 but figured I ought to have a read of part 1 first, so here I am. The prologue was ...

Hey there! You have some powerful points in this. My first nitpick is what type of writing is this? Whether it's an article/essay/report/rant matters, 'cause the following advice might not ...

Hey there, EKK15! I like your avatar, haha. :D I used to love the Rugrats. Hmm. I couldn't get very far without my flow being destroyed. It's those pesky 'and's. ...

Hello, Lumos! I loved your first few paragraphs. Your writing style is simplistic but has a true fairytale ring to it. Your characters are interesting too, with enough description that ...

Hey there, scribbleinks. From your 'what you missed' summary, it seems like your characters are in the middle of some major dramas. :D I'll get straight into the one weak ...

Hey there, ThemagicalEbonyFox! I have a few thoughts on the writing: A few distant memories started to surface in the back of his mind, but this only made him more ...

Hey, RoyalHighness. I am here to review even though you probably won't edit. :P You started with a clear introduction and ended with some sort of conclusion. There's a middle ...

Hey there, mistressbrennam. I agree with tswizzy22! I love the pictures. :) I looked out to the burning chaos ingulfing the planet. I knew our lives would never be the ...

The editorial, for those who can't be bothered translating: I am pleased to say that winning a car lottery is the best thing that can happen to me. Be able ...

Here I am again. :D Overall, I liked this a lot. The massive backstory was an excellent addition, it refueled the story and gave it some oomph. Because Frost Lark ...

Goooood morning! Look at a light bulb. No, really, go do it. Aren't they cool? But how do they work? Well, we have no idea. But we do have sprite. ...

Hey there, Greenie! It's Dracula again. :) I have made a terrifyingly interesting discovery. I will admit that I skipped everything in the middle and scrolled to the bottom to ...