Dracula

I'm not that good at reviewing poetry but I'll give this one a go. :) To whom do I owe my life, to the one who gives me strife? I ...

The first two lines are very strong and emotionally impacting. You could title this 'Unknown PJ Character' and I would instantly know it's about Zoe just from those first lines. ...

Hey there, EnderFlash. I love short stories so I thought I'd give this one a read. :) I'm glad I did, because it paints a beautiful image in my mind. ...

Hey there, captainace44, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you'll stay here for a long time and become part of the family. :) I'll type down my ...

Hey there, Aleta, and a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! The cold blanket of the sunset envelopes the remaining light, a serpent stealing the last essences of life ...

Hey there, Lau2001! His body convulsed on the metal operating table, his eyes rolling back and his mouth spewing yellow. He was about to die. Woah. What a great way ...

Hey there, Hikarufire64, I'm here to review! :) There are a few reoccurring errors I noticed in this chapter, so I'll point them out before I get to anything else. ...

Hey there, JadeBunny! As usual, they were bustling with people, people who were completely unaware of what was going to happen very soon. This is what we call a nitpick, ...

Hey there, ElvenJedi! Welcome to the Young Writers Society. :) I think you'll be at home here, because you obviously have a real passion for poetry. I really liked this ...

The first stanza: This was probably the weakest part of the poem. The twisted metaphor just isn't that powerful, unfortunately. I get what you're saying, and it's very Travis-ty, but ...

I liked it how you started the poem not by telling us Grover's story, but by telling us Grover's most important feelings. I think nature and Pan's destruction really is ...

Woah, I love this poem! You've summed at Ethan's story and character in literally just twelve lines. Ignore this suggestion if you like because it's poetry, but I think 'I ...

Hey there, it's Dracula again! :D I don’t like hospitals. I can always hear the thoughts of people, doctors, and patients alike. ‘No! STOP!’ Yells a voice.I can hear the ...

Hey there, ofmonstersandmen1234, I'm here to review your chapter! I see a man in a dark black mask holding my mother and father at gunpoint and, he tells me to ...

Hey! I'm reading this because the title and your description of it made me wonder what on earth is this thing going to be about? So here I am. :D ...